It's....unique
See, the problem with making a Flash video to this song is that the actual video for this song is animation, and some amazing animation at that. After having seen the video many times, one would think it would take something good to compare.
All you did was take 3 of the same backgrounds, obviously not yours (or else you could do something better), and a picture of a cog (also taken off the net, you can tell; besides, cogs with teeth that size wouldnt really fit together).
Why did you use a cog anyways? Because they show them in the real 'Breaking The Habit' video? That is really the only reason I could see a reason for using them. Unless you have a strange fixation with them.
Very bad movie, and the only reason I managed to sit through it all was because I turned down the sound and listened to the Evanescence song on TV at that time.
P.S. How long did you take writing the 'LP' letters? 3 seconds? Use some effort in your Flash. Flashing black from time to time, and shape tweening things is not hard.